Hayden’s Blog

On March the 27 Ms.Waters wrote a post challenging other classes to writing a post an how blogging has either helped you build a global audience or how a blogging has changed your life, or a post showing what you know about media on blogs.

During the time that our class has been blogging I have learned about how to write. Before our class started blogging I didn’t really bother with writing because I knew that after the teacher marked your writing it was forgotten.

• When our class started blogging even after the assignment was handed in other people could give feedback about your writing.
• When something really interesting happens in my life that I would want to share with more than the class I can write about it on my blog.
• With blogging you can connect with other people with the same interests.
• One of the most special things when start blogging is when you see that first dot on your cluster map (our class even still get exited when we see a new dot on our cluster maps, ssh)

If you blog what is your favorite part of blogging if you blog and if you don’t what sounds most interesting about blogging.

 Image by castaway in wales

During September me and my dad went to Toronto Ontario to watch my two favorite teams play each other. Unfortunately the Red Sox third basemen was injured so I didn’t get to see my favorite player on first. 

        The day before the we went and saw some different places  around Toronto, The first place we went to was the CN Tower the day before the game. When we got there my dad said that were not going to the top. When We got to the top my dad said that he wasn’t going to go on the glass floor. During the day if the dome of Roger’s center was open you could see the whole field. After the the CN tower me and dad went to see if we could find any blue jays jerseys. the first shop we saw had the Blue Jays jerseys for $100. When we saw that we decided to look around a little more. So we went to the Blue Jays store at Roger’s Center to see if the jerseys were cheaper there,they were a lot more expensive. So we decided to go to the store a couple hours before the game and buy the shirts.

         The next day finally came and I was as exited as ever! So we can get the jerseys before the game me and my dad left for the store at around 10:00 am. After we got the jerseys we stayed at the hotel and waited for until we should leave for the game. the first game was a really close game because there was two outs and a runner on third. but unfortunately the batter was swinging for a home run.

         The next day me and my dad basically spent the whole day waiting for the second game to start and were hoping that the jays won, that’s a good thing watching two of your favorite teams play, either way one of your favorite teams wins. That day the game wasn’t that exiting because the jays won by 3 runs and they won in the third inning.

The reason I remixed my post was because the original was really short and it didn’t describe the trip to Toronto very well. This is my original post and compare it to the first one

Hi, For all you who don’t know how to drive a car I’ll give you a crash course, (not really crash). Before you can take my course you first must get a car. What you thought that I would lend you one of my cars!

1. Get in the car.
2. Put on your seat belt. (very important)
3. Start the car.
4. Pull out of the drive way.
5. Lightly put your foot on the peddle.
6.  Turn the steering wheel until your facing the directionyou want to go in.
7. Slightly push down on the pedals.
8. Continue until you reach your destination carefully watching for cars and lights and stop signs. 
9. To successfully drive a car don’t follow these tips, please it’s really not good for you.

Image by: kyle may